I'd say Vindicator or Guardian, not both. If one of them remained dead, then the other person would have more motivation to keep fighting. Actually, I think it should be Heather because they already have a "Guardian."
Also Major Mapleleaf II and Puck II didn't really get developed enough. It would be cool if they were more...developed.
"Something is rotten in the state of Denmark"
Heather as Guardian
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Forthcoming stories in Breath and Shadow, Star Dreck anthology and The Aether Age: Helios.
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